While some people claim
that it is not true all PEDs have bad effects, so they state PEDs should
be allowed as long as they are monitored. However, in my opinion, it should be
banned. There are two reasons. First, athletes have to compete fairly. As
Catlin(2012) states, "Just as all athletes must begin at the same starting
line, they must also abide by the rules about what drugs they use." The
next reason is that it is bad for athletes’ heath. According to using PEDs they
might be suffered from some diseases which cause to PEDs.
Goodman mentions, "As I have listened to fighters discussing
their performance-enhancing drug use, along with their accompanying heart,
kidney, liver, bone, brain and psychiatric ailments." Because of those
reason it should be banned for athletes and their competitors.
References
Catlin, Don(August 7,2012). Testing Levels the
Playing Rield. The New York Times. Web.
Goodman, Margeret(August 8,2012). Clean Competition Is Satest. The New York Times. Web.
Goodman, Margeret(August 8,2012). Clean Competition Is Satest. The New York Times. Web.
Nice work: your paragraph is coherent and well-organized.
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