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government mandatory is to take care of people who need some helps and aids. It is
not only their fellow countrymen but also other countries people like
developing people. Global warming is caused by greenhouse effect which is
increased by human activities, and that becomes mainly reasons to developing
countries. According to Handwerk(2004) states “Humane activities, burning
fossil fuels concentrations by producing these gases(greenhouse gases) faster,
have greatly increased than plants and oceans can soak them up”(line 117). This
show developed countries have some responsibilities about global warming and
that means they have a duty which is to blame for environment refugees. Also, Environment
refugees can’t recover by themselves. The situation is getting worse. As
Kakissis(2010) explains “…more than 90 percent of the Korail slum’s residents
never leave because they cannot save enough money to leave”(para. 22). It means
even though ERs endeavor to overcome their misery situation, but they can do
that. We have to help them to recover their conditions. The last is that Global
warming is not just problems of some specific countries. We are apt to think it
isn’t our problem. However, global warming is a problem which is we have to
solve together. Because Global warming is caused by rise sea levels. it is
influenced by whole countries.
Nice work on this paragraph. Your ideas are well organized and your quotations effectively develop the topic sentence.
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