Gina
#6424/15/2015
Innovations for the Developing World
“Innovations for the
Developing World” by Erick Shonfeld is a writing about two inventions which
are helping people who are developing countries. The inventor name is Dean
Kamen. Kamen wants to solve problems which are water for drinking and
electricity of developing countries. Kamen experiments the machines for electricity
in real situation. It is significant innovation because it can help developing
countries people who don’t have productivity and leisure time. And he’s another
device is water-cleaning machine. Kamen and Iqbal Quadir have joined for distributing
the machines for rural villages. Their vision is to copy the decentralized
economic distribution model with electricity. They believe that model will be
more beneficial for developing country.
I impressed about his initiative
because many people knew the developing countries problems. But they didn’t
show in their action. Also, he invented some inventions then proceeded to adapt
the real situation. Of course his inventions were made to consider actualities.
So, it helps people who really need machines.
Good work but two comments: 1. Use reporting verbs in the summary. 2. Write a fully developed paragraph for the response. This is too short.
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